Blair

Term 2
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Mrs Parker wrote: a very imaginative concept, Blair, an ice cream stealing alien coming out of a portal. Editing points: all the speakers need to be on their own line. The punctuation must follow this format - speech marks, capital letter, full stop or comma close speech marks. said xxxx full stop or comma.

WALT: use speech marks correctly
==We tried to find the creature that came out of the portal. It turn__s__ out that it love__s__ ice cream. It had robbed an ice cream shop earlier. When we cornered it we stood __their__ in shock looking at the alien. I’m going to name you unknown”. I said it said I’m trying to find my portal’’ in a cranky voice. ‘’It can talk” I said. ==

// Silver Pete //
//Silver Pete was a cowboy kind of guy who was really good with a gun. but one day//