Tayla


 * Term 3**

Mrs Parker wrote: good start Tayla, work quickly to get the activity finished.

Week 8: WALT: use what we have read in a different way

1. Using the graph below, move the animals so that they are in their 'food chain' sequence and write one fact about each animal in the text box. is the fastest bird in the world. ||||||  || The Horned lizard eats |||| The Harvester ant eats || The mesquite pod. ||
 * [[image:http://www.skyriderforkids.com/doubletakes/Images/y_desert_dia_hawkpic.gif caption="hawk"]] |||||| [[image:http://www.skyriderforkids.com/doubletakes/Images/y_desert_dia_lizardpic_ro.gif caption="horned lizard"]] |||| [[image:http://www.skyriderforkids.com/doubletakes/Images/y_desert_dia_antpic_ro.gif caption="harvester ant"]] |||| [[image:http://www.skyriderforkids.com/doubletakes/Images/y_desert_dia_podpic.gif caption="mesquite pod"]] ||
 * The Hawk eats

Term 2
Mrs P :-)

WALT: use speech marks correctly.
The girls were speechless, as Bella was walking around the room singing up all night. I said to Bella “what is your job to do here in glitter planet?" “I am a spy . I really need help.” "What for? “ I said. “There is a golden compass that the baddies have got, but if the compass is in the wrong hands all of glitter planets aliens will die." cried Bella “So where is the baddies hide out?“ I said. “ We don’t know for sure, but the last time we were all fighting I put a location device on one of the baddies back." 

Mrs Parker wrote: great first entry into your draft work page Tayla, its nice to see a good lot of dialogue here. Copy the text below and paste it above my green writing. You will use the newly pasted text to make corrections with. That way we can look back and see the editing process. Editing points: each new speaker needs to have their own line. Once you have done that check the punctuation rules for speech marks. Speech marks, text, full stop, speech marks said xxxx fullstop or Speech marks, text, comma, speech marks said xxxx comma speech marks more text, full stop, close speech marks. See me if this doesn't make sense.

WALT: use speech marks correctly.
The girls were speechless, as Bella was walking around the room singing __U__p all night. I __S__aid to Bella “what is your job to do here in glitter planet // question mark //” “I am a spy. I __R__eally need help” What for “ I said. “There is a golden compass that the baddies have got, but if the compass is in the wrong hands all of glitter planets aliens will die “so __were__ is the baddies hide out “I said “ we don’t know for sure, but the last time we were all fighting I put a location device on one of the baddies back. 

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